I keep thinking about my project 3, and I'm pretty sure my next rhetorical move will be...
to add more personal experiences and perhaps focus on one specific landmark in NYC as oppose to Manhattan as a whole. I think that by doing this my paper will become more informative as well as passionate and show more of a gray of two shades of gray feeling that I have towards that specific place. Focusing on one place will probably also reflect my feeling towards NYC as a whole and will thus make my paper stronger.
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